Strengths:
-A clear process of thought is demonstrated.
-The typography effectively communicated the four chosen words.
-Strong research and time spent on developing typography
Weaknesses:
-Better initial research.
-Work on one or 2 of the letters ie the g and the y have different descenders.
-Work on the spacing and layout on the A1 sheet.
-Use black instead of pink.
Actions:
-work more into existing typography to gain a greater understanding.
-resize letterforms and work into individual letters.
-change to black.
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